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Kingdom of Vampires

Dark is all around me
All is wrapped from the fog
A sensation of an universal void
Like an omen of death and decay

The funeral bells are ringing...
In the churches
In this night without light
In this night without stars

From the grave I hear this voice
Satan arise
With his legion
Bringing horror and death
In the kingdom of vampires...

In the dark

The obscurity condemn the weak
Total domination of evil
The vampire wants to live again
And take the place of all living men!

Author notes

Yeah...just came to my head. It doesn't represent the Satan in my religion, just to let you know...
Written January 4th, 2005

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  • Exo
    January 6, 2005
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    Dark, vampires are so interesting to read about! And I really didn't expect to see "satan arise" either. ha, and of coarse, in your authors box..I knew that

    This was very vivid and creative! Great work here

    -nicci


  • Alahmorah
    January 4, 2005
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    Samael,
    Nice write. "In the dark" .....I like how you isolated this.
    "A sensation of an universal void
    Like an omen of death and decay"

    Good job.....keep writing, my friend.
    Love and Blessings, Ashlee aka Alahmorah

  • ObjctofmyObsesn
    January 4, 2005
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    Like this one

    Being an avid vampire fan (and if that makes me a geek, I really don't care) I really got into this one. Very deep. I look for more from you.....