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Ersatz

Blanket of grief,
Light of sorrow,
Eye of the storm,
Destruction to follow

Tears of blood,
You’ve filled my sky,
My eyes give up,
Please! Help me fly!

“Dream the truth”,
whispers fate.
“Look beyond
the eyes of hate.”

Dream your life,
Wish for night
Flex your spirit,
Show your might!

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Written January 4th, 2005

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