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A Sweet Tweety Birthday

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Yes, it's your birthday that we know,
Enjoy every moment with dreams aglow.
Reach for the stars every chance you get,
Try to think young, you're not old yet.
Wishes of love and happiness too,
Enhanced by sunshine I send to you.
Eat cake and ice-cream till you're nice and full,
Take time for yourself, it breaks no rule.
You might be a sassy southern bell,
Nothing's wrong with that, far as I can tell.
Escape the realities that fill your day,
Spend it jubilantly is what I say.
Savor in the fullness of your birthday.

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HOpe you have a wonderful day!!!
Written January 4th, 2005

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  • Parearoo
    January 4, 2005
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    Outstanding

    That is soooooo cool!! I loved it!! Send this to Hallmark, you could make a fourtune making greeting cards. Over all, it is an outstanding peice of work. Keep up the great job and keep in touch. ---Later--- Parearoo.
    P.S. I LOVE the background, it is awesome!!!


  • qnhoneybee
    January 4, 2005
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    This is a wonderful Acrostic that you have written for Yertweetyness. Rumor has told me that Tweety is only 28 I love the picture that you made it is great. You are a wonderful friend to everyone you know spreading your love and cheer. I think we are all so lucky that we have been given the talent to give the best gift of all; ourselves in our words!


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    January 4, 2005
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    How perfect. Great job Sam. I love this and I see our birthday girl does too. Great job!

    ~Lyrical


  • YerTweetyness
    January 4, 2005
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    Sweet as can be!

    Awwwwww! Thank you Sam!!!
    I have a gift for you and Melissa.
    I have a script code with a "no right click" for your web pages.
    The only part you both will need to change is what I wrote.
    Which says: "Belongs to Yertweetyness" You can type in anything
    you want. Like, "No right click on my page" Or....
    "You can't touch this" I'll email Melissa the code.
    Add this code so that people will not take your graphics.
    If you see that Melissa and I have some of the same graphics on our pages,
    Well thats because I gave them to her. If you see any that you
    like and want, Let me know, and I'll be MORE than happy to share.

    I love this picture! I'm glad Tweety doesn't have too many
    candles. Lol!
    I love this poem!!!! May I add it to my Author's page???
    Yertweetyness