Are you satisfied now?
With what you've said and done?
Can we figure out now -
what is now to come?
When will you leave me?
Shall I leave you?
When I've forgotten what
is false or true
You refuse me
You mentally abuse me
You ignore me
I just wish you'd hear me
Do you see me?
Perhaps you see me way too much
That could be the problem we're facing
'Cause I'm too far away to reach out and touch
Right next to you I'm sitting
You refuse me
You mentally abuse me
You ignore me
I just wish you'd hear me
I've lost you
You've lost me
If we'll join again
Is beyond what I can see
I need you
You gave up on me
Whether you will hear this
Is not up to me
'Cause you refuse me
You mentally abuse me
You ignore me
I just wish you'd hear me
Author notes
I actually wrote this for my mother. We had this really big fight, and she just basically told me to pack my s**t and get out. I went to my boyfriends house, and on the way, I wrote this.
Written January 4th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Mother/Daughter Poetry Contest by RunningPickle.
400 points, ended January 16, 2005, 15 entries
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Very heart-breaking and sad write. I'm sorry you and your mother got in a fight. I hope you two can work it out. The style of this poem is unique - something sort of like mine, and I liked that. Keep writing and thanks again for entering.
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