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Dear Mom

i find it pretty funny
when you say
"i love you"
because you're the only one
who consistently
makes me want to die

well fuck you
for everything
you've done to me
and everything you couldn't
be bothered to do for me

for every contradiction
and every slap
and every missed appointment
for every time i sat
in the cold for hours, waiting
for every broken promise

fuck you

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Written January 3rd, 2005

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  • Sara Bellem
    January 4, 2005
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    Yeah, bad relationships with mom, my how does that seem ever so familar in my life, its tough and it really sucks that the other parent (my dad) that understands me is gone, but anyways this poem is very deep, filled with anger and pain. I'm sorry you and your mom aren't close. I wish that things get better between the two of you ---Sara


  • EveJustWantedToKnow
    January 3, 2005
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    i don't want to work it out, she's abusive, i don't want a relationship with her.

    ~Kate

  • wbluerose02
    January 3, 2005
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    Great

    WOW
    I'm Speechless I don't know what to say,but I know putting your anger into words help so much.
    I was the same like you so angry with my mother,but now since I put my words into writing My mother and I get along now.
    smile and look into heaven and pray for you and your mother to work this out,I wish you luck in this.


  • EveJustWantedToKnow
    January 3, 2005
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    yeah writing keeps me semi-sane

    ~Kate


  • rock faerie
    January 3, 2005
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    i don't know why the poem seems to be full of anger and titled it as dear mom.. but this is straight act.. and i like it.. no matter what reasons you have for writing this one down.. doesn't matter.. you did a great job in expressing your angriness.. just keep your temper.. it won't help.. writing it down helps a lot?.. right?!.. keep it up..

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