between flashes light
is veiled, all hidden from view
just snapshost taken~
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Written August 30th, 2002
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Yes, this would be lightning storm. Well described in a few words.
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I love going outside when a storm is racing outside. I give you one hint on who I am. bow before the queen
- Allissia
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This is cool! I love storms! :D
~Best Wishes~ -
excellent
the writing is great, but i wish i could see the picture. its a wonderful technique. adding an image only inforces your point :) -
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awesome haiku...
i have many of them, if you're willing to read some sometime*
thanx for sharing!!
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don't touch it!
electric! very nice. -
don't touch it!
Very nice Susan!!! I love this lil ku of yours! -
don't touch it!
Sis you have missed a T out in snapshots....but a great write..could feel the energy...~~~GILL~~~ -
Thank you so much for the comment Berys
Susan~~~ -
don't touch it!
Feeling the power
radiating all around
I am a mere speck
WOW Susan just WOW you caught the life of a stormy night so well
Hugs
Berys
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