The scars on my body
Are not beautiful
The bruises on my body
Are not beautiful
The memories in my head
Are not beautiful
The damages done to my body
Are not beautiful
But they are a part of me
And I AM beautiful
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This is how I'm feeling right now.
Written January 3rd, 2005
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oooooooog
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Great
..And this is a beautiful poem. I feel like this alot of the time. I've never thought of writing a poem about it though. Well done
kati <33 -
This is a very thought provoking poem, and I am happy to know you have self worth, so many people don't. This is an amazing write.
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very good
Wow! i think everyone could really relate to this...
this is a very good write..."We are beautiful"hehehe i included myself...I hope u don't mind
God Bless ya!
Lyn -
At the onset of the piece it depicts quite a picture of abuse, but the underlying message of hope at the end is inspirational in the words you chose: "I AM beautiful!" This is true, my friend.
rose
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Wow, I really liked this. It has such a ring of truth to it, and a nice flow. It's just so nice to read the "I AM beautiful" at the end... wonderful.
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yes, you are beautiful and so is every word that pours from you...you are very talented and I am jealous.....
~Amber~ -
Exactly. Everything that is bad and tries to tear us apart, only, in the end, makes us a lot stronger and makes us all the more beautiful. You have conveyed these simple thoughts into a wonderfully crafted poem. You should be proud. Keep it up. Love always,
Kristen -
wow
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Oooh. I can really relate to this, and its really nummy. heh...sorry, i'm in a goofy word kinda mood. But I feel the same way about that entire piece, and you really made that come alive for me. Great job. Keep it up.
Always,
~*XChelseaX*~ -
This is a beautiful poem which I liked a lot, sad yet hopeful A positive poem, keep writing because this was fantastic
All the best,
Keep writing, I liked this a lot
Pozo
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this was a good poem, i think its awsome that at the end you had let it go as I am beautiful and that really made me like this poem because a lot of people think that things in the past are what makes things rough now and not to many people can let things go and u did u know what im saying? and i mean when you let all of that go by saying but thats part of me and i am beautiful it was just an eye opening feeling it was a great write keep up your great work ttyl
Joshuacrisel -
i think people are going to read this and feel inspired....it will change their life.....great piece and great point....your damn big fan.....will-bob
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awe i like this poem, it's so true everyone is beautiful even with everything that they have that they think is wrong with them and it's good that you think you're beautiful, nice write -obaybegrlx-
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