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First Kiss

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double jointed
meets
necessity


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Written January 3rd, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    May 11, 2005
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    lol save your applauses, I like the words better ..hehe have mental pic of a "Dork" as a "baby Stork"

  • Shadowbaby
    May 11, 2005
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    still awesome lol

    you know i'm such a dork...i so didn't understnad the whole applause thing. just go with it i'm nuts i know....


  • cutiepie gold member
    May 11, 2005
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    Thank you Glad you enjoyed it

  • Shadowbaby
    May 11, 2005
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    Awesome

    lol! Wow I love this. So simple so cute... Awesome!


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you I am so pleased that you enjoyed this


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you Katie


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    I search the web for free pictures...normally go to art sites...and "borrow" a few


  • Katie-Marie
    January 3, 2005
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    very cute.


  • punkrocksmidge
    January 3, 2005
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    Where do you get these images? lol. This is so adorable. It's short and simple. Says it all. Great job, keep it up.
    ~Smidge~


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed this


  • January 3, 2005
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    Oh so cute! Very sweet and wonderful. Likeys!

    Princess,
    ~Kya~


  • Alahmorah
    January 3, 2005
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    Awwwwwwwwwww! How cute.I loved it. Especially the picture. Good write, keep it up! Love and Blessings, Ashlee aka Alahmorah


  • PurpleSky
    January 3, 2005
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    ha ha this is really cute. Another enjoyable little write you have here
    love and hugs
    ~Lena~

  • Dr John Celes
    January 3, 2005
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    perfect

    Oh No! not again cutiepie!this is simply terrrific.luckily, men needn't have to stoop so low to sprain their neck in the act of their 'First kiss'!May be, the mother says,love, 'tis time to start standing tall like me for the restof your life! well done picture and write!you've been amazingly wisened by the years! God's gift for a life of toil.

  • RockStarAngel7
    January 3, 2005
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    Aw! That is adorable! That really was soooo cute! Nice job, again! You've go to be sick from hearing from me!!! LOL!


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you Glad you liked this picture. I thought it was lovely...(borrowed it ) lol

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    lol....well it was pretty similar...hehe. I am five foot nothing and my first boyfriend towered above me ....Glad you liked this . Many thanks


  • Parearoo
    January 3, 2005
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    That is one of the cutest pictures I have ever seen. I also liked the words that are under it. Over all, it was a great peice of work. Keep up the great job and keep in touch. ---Later--- Parearoo

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Ah....now you have made my day I am delighted that this "Tickled the imagination" Many thanks for your kind words


  • January 3, 2005
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    lol.
    This was funny.
    I thought it was going
    to be about YOUR
    first kiss.
    Great Write
    Lub it
    ~Jessica

  • trublu
    January 3, 2005
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    hilarious

    very nicely done!! and just where did you get my graduation picture? lol this brightened my day! thanks so much for the poem and the picture.
    bobby

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