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Big Brother

Missing image



Keeping feet dry
quandary
solved


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Written January 3rd, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you Glad you enjoyed it


  • Kukana gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    I LOVE the picture what a great find!
    Got right to the point and a cute way of doing so!
    Good job!


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed this .Many thanks for your kind words


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you I am delighted that you found enjoyment in this whimsey...all too often the weight of the world seems to hang like Democleses sword....a little light relief helps


  • punkrocksmidge
    January 3, 2005
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    Awww! That is the cutest picture This is very short, but it still says so much. I love the implication that your big brother is always there to help you out of difficult situations. Good job with this, and keep it up.
    ~Smidge~

  • Dr John Celes
    January 3, 2005
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    bravo!

    cute but great piece! The picture is very attractive and I wonder whether the little turtle climbed onto the mother's head all by itself or was artificially placed for a good photograph!all the same, both mother and child are in totally opposite ends of a spectrum as to how to keep the feet dry!and finally, it seems to have been solved in some way for the little one- precariously perched on her mother's head, a lovely ride like a king!But the mother should be now embarassed for the little one could have a nasty fall! But never mind, the SHELL will keep it WELL if at all it FELL! Good thinking and funny message that should evoke laughter to a sinking heart.

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    lol yes I like that too....

  • trublu
    January 3, 2005
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    or maybe:
    hey
    cool hat
    one size fits all

    or maybe not!

  • RockStarAngel7
    January 3, 2005
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    HAHAHA!! I love that! That was really adorable too! Problem solved! I love that! Such a small little write, yet so cute! Good job!

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Just trying to brighten the day Glad you liked it


  • cosmicrose
    January 3, 2005
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    LOL... and I thought it would be a political write. That my dear... was mighty clever stuff.

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    Thank you Ellie ... glad you enjoyed it


  • little-hug
    January 3, 2005
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    ohhhh cool picture and cool poem. It is really short but still well written and good to read.
    it is very good in my opinion
    ellie

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 3, 2005
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    lol you were too quick....you missed the picture


  • Parearoo
    January 3, 2005
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    Short, but cool. Kinda hard to comment on, but from what I can tell, awesome. Keep up the great work and keep in touch. ---Later--- Parearoo

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