When you come, I feel something
When you leave, I feel something
When you are far, I feel something
When you are close, I feel something
When you are quite, I feel something
When you talk, I feel something
When you are glad, I feel something
When you are sad, I feel something
When you cry, I feel something
When you laugh, I feel something
When I miss you, I feel something
When I think you, I feel something
When I feel, I feel something
Love is the name of feeling something
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Written January 3rd, 2005
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HI thanks a lot for liking my words
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oh no !! ive ran out of applaud thingys that blows !! damn okay im gunna have to give you my toe
..dont worry though its a pretty toe 
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hehe this is so simple yet it has so much meanign to it ..it shouts out APPLAUD !!!!! - - - > and thats exactly what im giving you
great job
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I really liked this poem and the repetition really brought it alltogether. Very Well written, nice!
Eruvande Almare
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Wow, this is really strong. I love it! It really expresses love very well. The repitition was really cool, too. Thanks for sharing. And thanks for the comments.
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Hi sweetheart
I like this piece, it brings out what love really is. nicely writen, I like the repetition of I feel something.
Take care because I care
Elaine
p.s
Happy New Year
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