When I知 alone
Whenever he is further than next to me
Away from home
I realize how blessed I be
I知 thanking for his kiss and touch
Thanking for his mind and such
I知 thanking for his eyes
Their wonderland goes on for miles
I知 thanking for his love for me
For nothing is greater than this I see
When I知 away
Forced to move from his side
Never astray
There痴 no reason to move with the tide
I知 thanking for his gentle touch
Thanking more than much
I知 thanking for his lips
And the sensation of his fingertips
I知 thanking for his love for me
And for my love for what he be
Author notes
All my life I have been pushing people away. I've always wanted to be alone, people in general never made me happy anyways. I wrote this about the one person I never wanted to leave. The one person that never had a reason to doubt my love for him.
Written January 3rd, 2005
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- Chain of Choices by WhiteGirl.
300 points, ended January 11, 2005, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Thank you SO much, I am very flattered! It really means a lot to me, to know that people like my poetry, because it's been my life-saver so many times!
Thanks again, and btw, did you check out my contest? "The worst thing I ever read" Please do, I think you'll find it to be a lot of fun....
Can't really thank you enough so I better quit it, before it gets embaracing...
Love, MJ -
I loved this poem because I feel the same way, congratulations I have awarded you first in my contest!
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