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Troubled Waters

Written in silence
Forgotten in words
Reaching for solitude
Unwritten verse

Sad I’m sorry illusion
Say you’re sorry confusion
Someway I’m in the middle of fusion
Someday you’re sorry illusion

Say you’re sorry someday
May be happy someway
Admit it you’re smiling you’re lying today
Say that you’re sorry in some way

Say you’re sorry illusion
See you are worry in motion
See you surrounding yourself with delusion
So better be sorry illusion

Sad I’m sorry illusion
Say you’re sorry confusion
Make peace with salvatory illusion
Live in my world of delusion

Say you’re sorry someday
Say that you’re sorry in some way
See you surrounding yourself with delusion
So better be sorry illusion

Author notes

This is about the first love of mine. It ended up rather emotional and hurtful. We are friends now, but I'm still wishing for him to tell me he's sorry for the pain he caused me.
This poem is basically about that wish.
Written January 3rd, 2005

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