The best kind of gum is bubble,
Though chewing gum will do,
But the worst gum is the kind of gum
That’s sticking to my shoe.
Author notes
circa 2000; If you like this one, check out "Earn Your Keep," "Yuck!" "Taste Like Chicken...Guts," "Keyhole?" "Picking Up The Spare" and "An Eye For An Eye". Thanks as always for reading and commenting.
Written August 29th, 2002
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Hey, man!
You have ruined my night, cuz I was gonna stay up drinking coffee writing a sonnet about gum and shoes! LOL It's weird, seriously, maybe I read this and that's why I wrote my shoe poem. That is soooo weird, dude. Geez. I don't remember reading it, but then again I don't remember what I had for lunch today....
A nice one, you show how it oughta be done. -
excellent
This is very strange...i have one called Gum on My Shoe!hehe. Think mine might be a different kind though! Great stuff. -
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Very Seuss-ian, I LIKE!
MAybe you can compile these into your OWN childrens book, like Shel Silverstein?
Thanks for the humor! -
excellent
Shoo gum – could be good if you had no sole… -
excellent
(smiles) I love this. Even though gum on my shoe is annoying I prefer that to gum in my hair. Thanks for commenting on my poem and for this little chuckle. DD -
don't touch it!
Nando this is ever so sticky..lol...ewwwwww..stuckkkkk...hahaha cute write...~~~GILL~~~ -
don't touch it!
lol
yayayayay But I'm the gum on your shoe!
I'm gonna pack up my pooter now mr nando....
Don't miss me too much!!!
Jadey xXx -
don't touch it!
i hates it when i steps into a pile of pink goo with my new ferragamos lol -
don't touch it!
roflmfao....get a stick man.. -
don't touch it!
simplicity as usual, Tater. Ah the covented position of 'Random Poet' If I can only grab the brass ring.
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don't touch it!
he,he and you people sure know how to chew gum, you might like my poem Gum..
Barbs
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