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Ahhhh!!!!

Magnetic words
s
 c
   a
     t
       t
         e
           r
             e
               d

get me thinking
the juices flow

TOO FAST

I can't find the words

TOO many magnets
TOO many thoughts

all at once

Author notes

about the frustration of using magnetic poetry when my writers block is finally gone- not my best piece but it IS an emotion and it is the most original I could find.
Written January 1st, 2005

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  • forgotten dream
    January 5, 2005
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    haha! this is delightful. incredibly creative topic and emotion - i can actually relate to the frustration of using magnetic poetry (sometimes all those words come at you at once and it's just overwhelming, and sometimes frustrating when you can't find what you are looking for). i think you have captured a lot in a few words, and it's unique, and a breath of fresh air. a joy to read! keep up the good work. thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest <33


  • Forms of Me
    January 2, 2005
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    Hum..this is such a wonderfully unique poem. I love it.

    I am wishing you the best of luck in this contest.