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i lay hoping
    the phone doesn't ring
    so it cant be you
when it does ring
    it doesnt matter
    because its not you
i don't care
    who they are
    or what they want
im unjustly angry at them
    for getting my hopes up
    and not being you
its not their fault
    that your not calling
    its not even your fault
i pushed you away
    with angry words
    taken back too late
im not surprised
    i dont blame you
    i wouldnt call me either

Author notes

this was inspired by the same guy who inspired uncertainty
Written September 7th, 2004

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