As I sit here alone in silence
I think to myself and wonder
Why have you left me with a broken Heart and Soul
And a spirit that's like a sinking ship going under
I entrusted to you my secrets and dreams
And you swore to me you's never fail
That each and every day
The words I Love You
You'd never forget to me to tell
But now it seems apparent
And I can't believe it's happened again
That another person has violated my Loyalty and Trust
And once more commited this unholy sin
The crime of being unfaithful
The sin of being untrue
But the only wrong I think I've become guilty of
Is the Unconditional Love of you
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Written June 30th, 2001
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don't touch it!
I have to say, I got exactly what I expected: An excellent piece; Beautifully written. Mind, body and soul, brought together in a poem of Love. A mind, heart and soul like yours I would love to meet.
Excellet work.
Keep writing, please!
~* Khaisha *~ -
excellent
lovely write. love is love and then some.
:0)
Nam -
your sentiments are wonderfully relayed in this piece. good show!
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awesome...you dont think with your brain, you think with your heart
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I like this! It is written with heart and soul.
I could feel your pain is this poem. Keep writing
with the heart!
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