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Who I am...

I am a girl

young at heart and soul.

I am a daughter

caring and loved all the same.

I am a fighter

I never let people bring tears to my eyes

I am a poet

spilling my heart for all to see

I am a lover

only one will receive my affections,

But most of all,

I am me

there is no explanation needed for that...

Author notes

"skillet rocks"
Written January 1st, 2005

A contest entry

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  • IrrefutableBliss
    November 28, 2005
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  • Night Terrors
    January 11, 2005
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    thanks 4 the entery

  • Shooting Star
    January 5, 2005
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    Great Write.. I enjoyed this.. I really like the end because.. you should not have to explain yourself.. you are you and that should be enough.. nicely done!


  • Night Terrors
    January 4, 2005
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    good job but you need to re read the rules not to worry though you still have time


  • mireflejo
    January 1, 2005
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    very true, but you shouldnt have to explain yourself to anyone! i loved this piece, its really cool! i loved the "i am a fighter bit", coz its great that you wont let people down. anyways, catch ya soon and keep on writing, this is great! mi reflejo xx

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