A BANKRUPT SOUL
WHERE MISERY IS CROWNED
FRAGILITY INCREASES
A HOME TO THE DAMNED.
Author notes
Just what I am seeing happening around me.
Written January 1st, 2005
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Dark and well written, I liked it a lot
Awesome description, keep writing and thanks for commenting on my poem
All the best,
Pozo
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I love this. It is so short and is like a cry of desperation. Great work.
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I always love it when someone takes just a few mere words and turns them into something so powerful...As much as this stands so well on its own I would love to see it expanded.
Victoria Lin -
This feels so empty, not the poem, the feelings evoked by this brilliantly created short expressive exploration. I found this to be deep and profound in so many ways. As if given the dark side of the human condition as aging occurs…when the body begins its failing and the soul does not keep up the process of letting go of this life to embrace the next….instead, trying to hold onto this side of life it experiences bankruptcy
An amazing poem.
Blessings and best wishes,
~richard
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you're right, very right. it is a fine poem but so short
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wow.. your seeing all that.. well, it was a good poem. I see this sometimes.. nice flow tour poem.. anyways hope you keep writing because I can't wait till I can read more of your work..
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