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My 'pen' to 'paper'

Another year has ended,
Time itself is bended.

To cease for that special moment.
Where blade to skin too, I cut my sonnet.

To the aches and pains that must be forgotten,
And putrid, hateful thoughts...may they remain buried rotting.

To forget those hateful days of woe,
And to make a friend of every foe.

To love, and give and never take,
To resolve to Live, and n'er die,
Though there may be days made to Break,
Me, myself and I.

In the year that is speeding toward me.
Up ahead.
Happy new year to all, Yea, thats what I said.



Author notes

"cuz I'm on the inside I'm looking in. I can see you see your true colours Cuz inside you're ugly ugly like me...I can see you see the real you..."

- got the inspiration from this...*somehow* Btw... got some time b4 ppl came over...so I thought I'd say hey to all those ppl on AP... cuz Hell I guessing you're my family too...~right Ashley... ~

(yep ...probably the only mushy piece you'll find written by me... )
Written December 31st, 2004

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  • LonelyDepressed
    March 15, 2005
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    I liked. Awe comon. But mushy poetry is good.. you know, occaisonally.. *looks away* uhm yeah.. nice poem..

    chrissy


  • Hearta
    January 15, 2005
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    Happy New Year

    very clever.... indeedy! It's like a resolution only written out more solidly... Which traditionally is a wonderful thing

    these lines affected me in some way (good):

    Where blade to skin too, I cut my sonnet

    And to make a friend of every foe (it's not easy to do this, but it's fun to try)

    beautifully expressed, almost in a solemn way.. (i think).. keep the faith! rock on bab'ayy


  • LivnitAll4You08
    January 6, 2005
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    i liked this, its great. I love the way u worded everything..

    ~Tess


  • Pocket
    January 1, 2005
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    Aw, wow. This is beautiful! I really hate new year for some reason but this made me happy. It's so ...clensing. A perfect poem for new beginnings.


  • Parearoo
    December 31, 2004
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    Outstanding

    Outstanding job, Mike!! I loved it, it just charms me in an undescribable way!! -Holly

  • IHeartFatBoyz
    December 31, 2004
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    SWEETHEART! This is sooo good! I loved it! Happy new year to you too! *gives you candy* be careful tonight! Dont get to wasted!


  • -apparition-
    December 31, 2004
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    I like this piece I love New Years Eve because it is a whole new year and there's so much potential in it. It can be made or broken, it's all new turf to do with it whatever you want. Risks, chances... and you protrayed that well in here. I like the line about cutting your sonnet, thats an interesting way to portray poetry (in more than one form, with the blade). Have a great New Year!


  • LeftBehindBebe
    December 31, 2004
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    Awww..ver wonderful, and true. This was greatly written. Great job, and happy New Year ta you too. ~*~*~PaRtY!!!~*~*~

    Marissa

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