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Revive Me

Right after
An internal hell,
I'm in the rhythm and
The love spreads through my
Torn-apart soul

Revive me, love!
Make me whole and
Scatter these tears
To give life to
A new plant...

There's darkness but suddenly
A flash of light -
Revive me!
(I can sense something
Coming alive inside.)

And when I hear
"We love you all!"
It's not just a
Pile of cheese -
No!
You're reviving me, love
Make me whole again -
Let me taste the
Beauty in your words
Twisting through the air
Like some shining
Truth.

Revive me, love!
Make me whole and
Scatter these tears -
Give life to
A new flower -
Your purity
Will not go
Unblessed.

Author notes

I couldn't pick between being stuck in hell for a little over a month (i know that's not too long, really, considering some people are in the hospital for years... but for me it was just.. unbearable), or the best... event of my life - the concert of L'Arc~En~Ciel.
aah,  I remember driving down to Baltimore and not believing that this was real - that I would be seeing L'Arc~En~Ciel live. Back then, they were my favorite band still, but only after the concert were they risen to new heights.
And this is because they made me whole. Their music was so heartfelt, everything was amazing.
Even though I know that in the normal concerts like back in Japan, they will be tellling dirty jokes to their audience... but something about them is just so... just so... I don't even know how to word it.
So.. that's what this is about.
Written December 31st, 2004

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  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    December 31, 2004
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    much depth to this and the emotion so obviously spilling right off the page . It never fails to amaze me how music or lyrics can touch us so deeply...but with a name like " arch in the sky" how could a band go wrong . Thx so much for entering and sharing . best of luck and may you have a very happy new year,
    Reenie;f


  • Sensuity
    December 31, 2004
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    The mood of this poem perfectly meshes with the background.I love the way you sound impatient for love.


  • mireflejo
    December 31, 2004
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    really cool, in a wierd way!! i <3 it!! and a month is a long time, i get bored after a few minutes!! lol! great as always, charli xx