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Eye-Opening Skeleton (a Riddle)

I'm an eye-opening skeleton
And the answer to this riddle!
My life is not all hard,
I'm smooth -- fit like a fiddle,
Solving mysteries is my game --
Hidden, dark, locked up secrets
I apply and solve all the same.
With symbols, thoughts, words, a pattern--
Want to see the universe,
I'll give you a map of Mars or Saturn--
Tell you  to reach deep in the purse!
Maybe curved like the "c" in chord
Or straight like a blank of brass or steel,
Cursive or straight like that in Ford,
With just the right touch you master the wheel.

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Written December 31st, 2004

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  • David Houston
    June 6, 2006
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    Congrats to you, once again, as you are correct. Thanks for the comment and applause. Best regards too!


  • Nephlim
    June 5, 2006
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    Hmm the answer seems like it's right there lol but I'm working on it the dusty little brain wheels are turning. Great job.

  • oneluckygirl
    April 9, 2006
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    Dang, I realize how far behind I am. I doubt I'll ever be able to keeep up with you.


  • Ubacubissubej
    May 2, 2005
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    Yet another amazing piece!! I really like how the answer is the answer, if that makes any sense at all, lol. I think this is one of my favourites, because the answer is always something the tends to elude me when I'm trying to solve your riddles! Yet another great piece, keep it up!
    *Uba*

  • David Houston
    March 4, 2005
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    Congrats to Spiffy, and she has been solving at least one a day lately. Thanks, and Best Regards, avi


  • spiffy
    March 4, 2005
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    I figured it out yay yay. But just to make sure i'll im.

    ~Spiffy~

  • David Houston
    January 6, 2005
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    Hey Carl, she rules, you know it as well as me! As far as shaking that booty, I hope she is because she deserves it. LMAO! Peace, David

  • David Houston
    January 6, 2005
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    Kim, thanks for your comment. Riddles are the oldest poetic form dating back to the ancient Greeks and early Romans. A book was found from the Middle Ages containing riddles that monks recorded and the name of the copy I read is titled, The Exeter Riddles, i believe (I don't know the publisher but i know you could find). It is very interesting as well as written and published in Old English, with modern translation and annotation. Also, Emily Dickinson (as well as many other poets too) has a famous one with a first line of "There's a narrow fellow in the grass...." Thanks again and sorry it took so long to respond but i missed your comment. Peace, David
    Edited on Mar 04, 9:15 p.m. because ''.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    January 6, 2005
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    Yep, she's been here too. LMAO. I'll bet she was jumping up and down and shaking that sweet ass of her's after solving these.

  • David Houston
    December 31, 2004
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    Man, this was posted like 27 minutes ago an d touchyof1der (lol)
    got it already. If this keeps up, then I'm going to run out of riddles sometime in the middle of 2006! LOL-LOCKED Great jof Kimberly and thanks for all your help, concern, and just free love and attention. Peace


  • Touchof1der silver member
    December 31, 2004
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    You know how I love these. You are such a big tease to my literary mind and I am s-o-o-o addicted to these riddles of yours.
    ~Kimberly
    Edited on May 28, 10:47 because ''.


  • poisonedpen
    December 31, 2004
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    wow...i have no idea! lol! but this was such a cool idea to write a riddle in a poem! i really liked this even though im still trying to rack my brain figuring out what it is...hmmmmm....all i can think of is a skeleton key...but i know thats not right. lol. this was tons of fun. great write!
    luv,
    *KIM*

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