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Happy New Year, God.

Why did God let thousands of people die?
Taking family and friends away
People who never deserved to die
Kids be orphans
They have no home.
9/11
Tsunami
Earthquakes
Murders
Rape
Thanks for leaving us God.
Fighting for ourselves
Not helping people who need it
Not listening to their pleas.
What a great gift god.
Happy New Year.

I hope you're safe.

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This is sooooo shitty. I'm just mad and i'm really out of it right now (due to being sick) this is sorta just lke random blabber and I'm going to add more later
Written December 31st, 2004

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  • cc
    December 31, 2004
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    really let the emotions fly there,getting it out of your system in prose is good therapy.God really gets a beating of late though satan is the one doing the work.just my thought.till people realise who god is its not going to change.try not to be to bitter over it all.life will find a few nice miracles

  • Smittie325
    December 31, 2004
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    I really liked this, mainly because I feel the same. I myself don't believe in God or anything of the sort because I thought he loved his "children"...well if God loved his children, then my dear, why would thousands of people (including children) be dieing from illnesses, malnutrition, etc all over the world? Wowee, sorry I'm rambleing. I really liked the background for this too! Good write!


  • Rachal
    December 31, 2004
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    I like this! Is sarcastic yet sad. And sometimes I think this too. Everyone thinks god is so wonderful and holy, but if so, why do the thigns that happen hapen. I mean wouldnt he want to stop the horrible thigns that happen. He created us, why would he want to see us die out! But, I have to beleive in god and blody blody blah! But, sometimes when stuff good happens in my life i think maybe there is a god. But maybe god jsut wants us to fight our own battles and see if humans are strong enough to beat them. Oh, I dont know. Im just blabbing on. Anyways, GREAT WRITE!!
    Happy New Year!
    keep writing, Rachal


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    December 31, 2004
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    I like this a lot, you have a talent with words, thanks so much for sharing this, I will be looking forward to more from you in the near future..
    Ambular