I try to look at the picture on the wall
But all of a sudden the phone starts to call
And slowly but surely the tears begin to fall
Tears of joy, because I know it's you
I look to the sky, to the clouds above
My heart begins to flutter, like the wings of a dove
Cos I know what I am feeling, is the feeling of love
Love, because I know it's you
I sit in my room alone, waiting for you to come in
To inspire me through thick and thin
I hope you know my heart you can win
My heart, because I know it's you
Author notes
A song written way back in 2000. My second ever song. Originally a poem, written in 1999.
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A contest entry
- Inspirational by xstalkerx14.
300 points, ended December 22, 2004, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so sweet! I hope that whoever you wrote this about is your true love! I mean, you have a gift! Your writing is like magic...great job again! LOL!
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Aaaah this is lovely, pure sweet love. Very well written and uplifting.
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This is beautiful. Your second song... hmm.. One day I will have all your songs on tape or cd lol. Beautiful Laura
~~Jessica Erin
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this is so sweet..its great to get those feelings..hold on to them...thanks for entering my contest..good luck and God Bless
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i agree with mente obscena that the first stanza is the best!
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Very sweet. The first stanza is my favorite.
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Awww, this is so sweet. Sounds like young love. -
This is one very lucky person to get all this love.
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