A smile appeared on my lips
A tear fell from my eye
A memory came from my mind
A question asking why
Looking back over the past
Those days I knew so well
They left me behind and moved on without me
And on my knees I fell
I cried out to the sun in the sky above
That it would darken the thoughts inside
But like my past, it moved on
And left me with nowhere to hide
But I don't want to move on
Without doing things the right way
I wanna know where to go from here
While I'm dreaming of a better day
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A contest entry
- Hope by sarahspoeticheart.
300 points, ended February 26, 2005, 17 entries
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We all dream of better days...sometimes I wish that I could go back in the past and change the way I behaved...but it is virtually impossible. You just feel as though you are alone in this world, with only your family and a couple of friends. The rest of the people torment you...well, I am going to stop giving my life story! LOL!
This poem went very deep and was nice to read! You have a way with words! I can tell you that!
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thata great poem and was very deep and inspirational. i really enjoyed reading it. it was very nice and well writen great job!
Edited on Jan 13, 11:20 because 'typos'. -
Very inspirational... always think of a better day and things that are worse in the current one will disappear. Wonderful poem hun
~~jessica erin
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