I see the stars that shine for you
Sparkling in the dark of night
My heart flutters with the memories of
Your eyes that shine so bright
No word I say can truly express
The feelings that we share
My heart is wild with lust and love
This passion I cannot bear
Here I am alone without you
My arms are empty and cold
My heart is warm and full of love
For you, my knight so bold
Again I look for the stars
The ones that shine above
Many a knight may shine for me
But none truer than you, my love
In a list
A contest entry
- love poems by JustAnotherSuicide.
300 points, ended August 10, 2004, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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//In a word, suh-weet!//
//A very lovely poem, well written. I almost melted when I finished reading it! Beautiful job well done!!!// -
wow buddy this is amazing
that is so pretty . i really enjoyed reading it. keep it up.
Guin -
VERY GOOD
THIS FLOWS SO EASILY FROM THE WRITER. A REAL LOVE POEM! -
This is a great write! I am glad that you took the time to read the poems that I made before....because it gave me the chance to see your writing! It really is brilliant! Great job!
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Wonderful!
I love your poetry! This is so wonderful! You have got to write more!
~Sarah -
This is sooo sweet. sighs You are such a wonderful writer Duckie.. even all that time ago
~~Jessica Erin
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Hi,
This is an awesome write, well done. -
Aww! So sweet! I love it! Great write and keep up the great work!
~silentscreamer~ -
Great!
This is great! I love the imagery. Good job!
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Great love poem.
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This is romantic and sweet. Not the typical reference to a knight. I like the play on words with night and knight. Done without seeming sappy or cheesy. Good rhythm, and unforced rhymes. Flowed smoothly and was a joy to read. Good luck in the contest!
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excellent
This is how I feel about my Husband of 19 years! -
A lovely testimonial to a true love.
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