I realize now, though I don't want to
This, you and me, won't work
The love that we had was so strong
But that chemisty is now gone
I yell and scream, though I don't want to
This, you and me, is turning to pain
As you pack your bags and walk towards the door
I began to say...
But You cut me off
Speaking your heart
Don't say good-bye
Don't say I hate you
Don't say you don't want to see me again
'Cuz you know you will
Forever, good-bye is better left unsaid
I realize now, after I said goodbye
That I was wrong and you were right
I miss you so much
Is it too late?
When you open the door, that you and I used to walk through
You take one look at me and start to shut the door
And begin to say
But I cut you off, speaking my heart...
Don't say good-bye
Don't say I hate you
Don't say you don't want to see me again
'Cuz you know you will
Good-bye is better left unsaid
Good-bye is better left unsaid
Author notes
I wrote this when I was 10 years old and just recently found it. I'm looking to make some changes and make it sound more sophisticated. Does anyone have any suggestions??
Written March 11th, 2000
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Deep & thought provoking
Only ten years old????
Geesh...I am way more than 10 years old and could NEVER write something that sounded this good. I honestly hope you don't make too many changes to it. I like it the way it is.
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this has true emotion and is a great write. and if you wrote that when you were ten then i am jellious cause that is verry well written! great job and thanks for the comment on my poetry! later
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I like this alot, Yes things such as the words goodbye, the words of those in love dread to hear, is better off left unsaid, What a very good write dream, I really enjoyed this one,
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