motion suspended
animated reaction
captive evidence
Author notes
Form...Haiku
Written December 29th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- None Rhyming Forms by pozo.
300 points, ended December 30, 2004, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you Ash
I also love Haiku's...they are challenging...hope to read one from you soon 
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Thank you Amamda I am delighted that you enjoyed this ...many thanks for your kind comments
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Thanks....glad you enjoyed this Haiku Many thanks and no I didnt need a dictionary this time...but sometimes I do
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Many thanks Buchan...glad you enjoyed
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the perfect haiku...it floows the syllables and it is about nature...the perfect one like i said. i love this haiku but i am bias becuase haikus are my favorite type of poems, though i rarely write them...great job!
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Short and simple definitely does it this time
The particular words you've chosen for this are wonderful. Good luck in the contest
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whoa.... it's like a picture in words.... so short but so simple and.... i like it!! your great with words! did you need a dictionary for that or what? cause those words a DEFINETLY not in my vocabulary...
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excellent
Like the picture ,strong in word and expression. Well done -
I have always admired these preditors...they have a majestic beauty all of their own. I am pleased that you enjoyed this Haiku, many thanks for your kind words, they are appreciated
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Thank you Destiny I am delighted that you enjoyed this Haiku, many thanks for your kind words
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Thank you Nature lends a helping hand
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Every great once in a while I get to see a bald eagle. I tell you it makes my year. And your poem reminds me of those wonderful days, and for that I truly thank you. wonderful write.
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This is really beautiful. I liked the photo, it played well off of your haiku. I love Eagles. This was great.
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So majestic, tis is, a seering show of beauty seen. Your haikus are amazing, it takes a talent to use so little words to express so much emotion.
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Thank you Pozo...my apologies I put it in the wrong place
I have corrected it and thank you
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Hey, great poem although you need to put that it's a haiku in the author's comments Perfect haiku, I liked it a lot Thanks for your entry
All the best,
Pozo
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