Secluded and lonely,
I don't want to be the only,
one in this room.
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I wanted to write something short and dark.
Written December 28th, 2004
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This is a pretty good poem, although short it has alot of feeling in it and I can just imagine you sitting there all alone on your bed.
~RoberT -
you wrote a masterpiece....they dont need lots of words, nor do they need the right ones, but they need meaning and heart in them to win. and you wrote one because you meant it when you said you dont want to be the only one in your room. that you feel lonely and secluded. nearly everyone knows what that feels like to be alone. but im thinking of you......i dont think your alone, im sure theres someone looking out for you.
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thanx
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Well You did it. i like it, its to the point. its kind of like..."screw you have a nice day" one of those. awesome.
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