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warmth

i lost my heart
where could it
be i lost my heart
it wondered away
from me it doesn't
feel torn apart
it feels warm and
safe where could
it be i locked it
away with a key
and now i've lost
it how could that be
oh yeah i forgot i
fell inlove with somebody

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Written December 28th, 2004

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  • unoodostres
    December 29, 2004
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    omg this is so friggen adorable! aww! It reminds me of one of those quotes that girls put in their AIM profiles haha. This is so cute... aww... whoever it is is mighty lucky!