There it is,
standing in the pasture.
Chomping away
at the food beneath her.
It stares ahead,
watching all that goes by.
What is it thinking?
No one will ever know.
The others call out,
to the noise of a familiar sound.
"FOOD!" one cries.
"It's about time!" another says.
But this lonely one,
doesn't sway from it's ground,
chomping down on what it already has.
"Idiot" a cow says to the lone one.
But still, she stayed.
As the others feasted,
on the much awaited for food,
this lonely cow chomped away,
and gave a call out..."oooooOOOOOMMMMM"
Author notes
I asked kissmysock to give me something to write about... she said cows... So I did... I hope it's ok. It is 100% different from my normal style of writing.
Written December 28th, 2004
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I love it, its soo cute! Lol...cows scare me a lil though but this is so cute.
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Heh, nice. Dyslexic cows ... that's an original idea.
Ha! One of your commenters identified with this because their brother's dyslexic and they love cows ... that's great!!!
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It was a good write. It was really funny. cows that can't read very well, so there words come out backwards. Very interesting.
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I really didn't mean for any of it to rhyme.. it just happened. Sorry I confuesd you.
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I AM THE LORD OF UNDERPANTS!
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I AM THE LORD OF UNDERPANTS!
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I AM THE LORD OF UNDERPANTS!
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I AM THE LORD OF UNDERPANTS!
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OMG!!! I LOVE!! thats sooo gorgeous!! my bro is dyslexic and i LOVE cows
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That was a good poem, the only thing is some of it rhymed and some of it didn’t! That confused me a tiny bit! Over all you did a great job writing a poem about cows! My mum loves cows so i am going to show the poem to her! keep up the good work!
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I love it. Very funny and clever
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