Someday I will regain a smile upon my face,
until then I'll wonder if these memories are worthwhile,
because of them you seem to be in denial,
you seem to have forgotten me, so why can't I forget you?
then I awake to the pain of knowing that I still need you.
It seems my heart refuses to heal,
all the damage you caused seems to be surreal,
every single tear that seems to fall,
is another one of my hearts lonely calls.
My hand reaches out into the dark night,
and I stroke the air with a soft carress,
do you feel the wind upon your face?
as the rain falls down with such a disgrace.
the lifeless tree's sing out my mind's sorrow,
as the world awaits for the ray's of the new morrow,
but those ray's won't seem to shine upon me,
it's in the darkness where you left me to be.
I will never see the light of a new day,
until the thing that comes true is the prayer that each night I say...
Praying that you'll come back,
wishing that time to be today.
For today to be the day,
in which I once again feel the sun's rays.
Author notes
explanitory. more scattered thoughts...... I hate this feeling...
Written December 27th, 2004
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"every single tear that seems to fall,
is another one of my hearts lonely calls.
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-love these lines.....reminds me of my fave song of all time....walter's walk, by led zeppelin (listen to it if you dont know it already* -
mmm usually when my thoughts are all scattered and stuff, because theyre so, well, everywhere i need to talk to someone or write them down just to get them straight. it sucks. i can never understand whats goin on in my own head really.
i think i would have liked this better if it wasnt rhymed. thoughts flow better when they're not forced into rhyming. thats just my opinion though...
good luck with this. take life day by day and try to live fully, and if that means moving on from him... so be it.
good job
love love,
sabrina -
yes...
I do understand
remembering someone that one can't get out of their mind...as the tears flow freely!
Huggles you
One day you'll find that special someone.... and these tears will be forgotten like distant dream!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
Edited on Jan 09, 4:00 p.m. because ''. -
One day sweetie you'll find that one person who won't break your heart, but instead fill it with so much happiness that you never thought could happen. When that day comes you'll be so happy, and I'll be very happy for you as well. Until then, just hang on. I know it's hard, but you have to because that person will be there one day. May not be today or even tomorrow, but when that day comes you'll know. Love ya sweetie.
Michelle -
good describtion on how this person makes u feel like one of the sun rays awww... thats a very good comparision.. i know how it is they hurt you put yet u still love them and cant get over them cause you care that much it sux... it time it'll pass keep up the good work love ya chelle
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for some reason i want to tell you to move on, and not to wait for this person, but with that i would be telling myself the same, i'm in too much denial so lovely write
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awww.... so sad... i loved it. i hope you feel better soon. this was really beautiful! good luck. i hope you see the light of a new day soon. keep up the good work. :-)
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Whoa, that is incredible. A very well written
write. Lot's of emotion expressed. I really love
this. My favorite line was this...
"as the world awaits for the ray's of the new morrow,"
I don't know, I just really like it. Thank you for sharing
and God Bless you!
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Katie
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it's pretty good though it's not the kind of poetry i usually like.the imagery is really good.keep up the good work!
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