sloth
disinclination
reluctant hesitancy
indisposition
greed
avarice desire
rapacity and deadly
personified sin
lust
concupiscence
self indulgent desire
lecherousness act
gluttony
eating to excess
feel voraciousness
rapaciousness
envy
green-eyed monster
covetousness jealousy
spite and resentment
pride
respectful feeling
satisfied with achievements
self love vanity
anger
belligerence found
intense rage on epic scale
aroused by a wrong
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Ruby gloom rocks
Written December 27th, 2004
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Ah thank you for reading one of my older poems and leaving a nice comment. I so appreciate it. Take care and have a wonderful weekend. God Bless, Sandy
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I like the way your poem makes the 7 deadly sins so simple
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Thank you so much for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy "f
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This was great...gives the reader some serious things to consider... Nicely put!!
The form was a good idea...it made the flow perfect!!
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Thank you so much for the nice comment. This was fun to write. Great contest. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the nice comment Jason, I always appreciate your opinion my friend. Take care, Love, Sandy
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Wow this was sin-tastic. Wow i'm pretty cheesy but these haikus were really great. thank you soooo much for entering, especially this option (my personal favorite). Great write and good luck
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Interesting
Wow, that was pretty good, I think it would take me a long time to writ something like this. How long did it take you? Anyway, I like the way you wrote it, very good and intelegent!
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