For eternity, my darling
Your crimson-stained grin is echoing
I remember your broken laughter as I
Took a step closer ~
The befuddlement was clearly etched
Across my face
It's no surprise,
The way you giggled and
How you told me that
In the end, we were together
But the confusion is clear -
In shards of your memory
I could write a novel of how the
Many facets the jewel of your
Love
Still gleams
Author notes
"Madness takes its toll. Please have exact change." . Um if this isn't what you were looking for in the contest I'll change it if you'd like, just let me know ;D
Written December 27th, 2004
A contest entry
- Something To Sleep To At Night by OneMorePeacefulDay.
375 points, ended January 2, 2005, 18 entries
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Superb
In today's society, there are still people who will try to be in the middle of relationships. It is sad because sometimes people love each other so much and when you break them up, scaring occurs. I love this poem so much. I really like and wanted to tell you congrats on the piece. Thank you for sharing it with others. -
Wow, this is a beautiful poem which I liked a lot- so romantic and excellently written
Keep writing, this was fantastic
All the best,
Pozo
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wow, this is really really good! im gunna use my favourite saying....lol...crazy brit!...."befuddlement"-que una palabra! well done i <3 this, speakt to ya soon, charli xx
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