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The New Year's Embrace

As this year passes
One should let it's pain pass with it's fleeting moments

As this year passes
One should let it's goodness flow into the upcoming moments

As this year passes
One should embrace the hope which is now greeting us

To allow this New Year's Embrace
to encapsulate us and allow it's to light the way

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Written December 27th, 2004

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  • smiley
    February 14, 2005
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    Yes I agree, last year is of the past. This is a new year, a new beginning.

    Yvonne

  • mysticriver
    January 13, 2005
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    Thank....T...as always.


  • texast
    January 10, 2005
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    Let's face it - holidays are tough... This is wonderful in its style and message.

    I like.... T