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Jason (live4eternity)

live4eternity


gentle young poet
help find salvation
new christian brother

praises God in song
spiritual songwriter
teach youth fellowship

biblical reader
share lasting friendship
always a good heart

Author notes

This is for poet live4eternity whom I met on here and who led me to God and helped me get saved. He helped change my life forever. Thank you my friend.
Written December 26th, 2004

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  • Gwalinna
    July 19, 2005
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    Sandy, This was really sweet, and I am sure Jason loved it. you did a wonderful job Mom. it was very nice. keep writing.

    AP Daughter

    Peace

    Beth

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 28, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 28, 2004
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    I love you too dear friend. God bless you always. Take care, Sandy

  • live4eternity
    December 27, 2004
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    Thank you so much dear friend, I love you and am apriciativwe of your love. You flatter me, thank you so much!

  • MariGoes gold member
    December 27, 2004
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    I can see that you have found a friend for life Wonderful feeling when one can show us the way in life.
    The imageries and the feel you passed through in those three haiku are very warm and lovely!

    Keep in mind not to use past tense as you write a haiku though. Contemporary or traditional, always use present tense

    I thank you for your entry and wish good luck in everything you do!
    Mari

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 27, 2004
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    Thank you so much for your lovely comment. God has truly blessed me with a wonderful friend. Take care, Sandy

  • BonnieQ silver member
    December 27, 2004
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    Wonderful

    There is no better friend than one who leads another to our dear Lord and Saviour. This is a wonderful tribute, Sandy, saying all the best things about a friend. So, good luck in the contest!

    Love and hugs, Bon

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 27, 2004
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    Thank you so much John for the nice comment. I thinh you would enjoy Jason's work. Take care Sandy
    Edited on Dec 27, 10:13 because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 27, 2004
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    Thank you so much Melanie for reading this poem and leaving a nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • J Rhys Davies
    December 26, 2004
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    You did such an excellent job with this. This makes me want to go check out their work and see what would cause such adoration from another member of AP. Nicely done.

    ~ John

  • luckynsincere gold member
    December 26, 2004
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    Oh, Sandy... You did a most wonderful job with this... I am happy you have found such a wonderful friend...
    Melanie

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 26, 2004
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    Thank you for the supportive comment Eddy. I do appreciate it. I will beware, don't you worry. Take care , Sandy
    Edited on Dec 26, 6:22 p.m. because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 26, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate the encouragement.
    Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 26, 2004
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    Take care, Sandy Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate the encouragement.

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 26, 2004
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    Thank you pozo I wrote one for you in her last one the other day. It didn't win. Take care, Sandy
  • Just4u
    December 26, 2004
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    words hide intentions
    beware of the false prophet
    actions show the truth

    Hugs...Eddy

  • SEA angel
    December 26, 2004
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    Well Done Multiple Haiku

    For certain Jason is a prized friend if he led you to God. May God be with you in your rising and in your sleep and always.
    Edited on Dec 26, 6:16 p.m. because ''.
  • pozo
    December 26, 2004
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    Aww, great write for Live4eternity- I know he'll appreciate it

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 26, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
  • ConkersMinion9
    December 26, 2004
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    Nice write
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