Infinite stars like shimmering pearls,
Whose beauty shines in the sky
Beams from afar with glittering swirls
Earthbound before my eyes,
These stars so named from myths and tales
Drape the night above
Have led the way for lost ships at sea
And beckoned two in love;
New worlds, sublime from birth to decline
Metamorphised in glorious stage
I marvel to watch the celestials stars
Center stage about to be disperse
As twilight fades to the evening sky
With it's song of the universe
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Written August 25th, 2002
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This is one of your best so far, in my opinion. One of my other favorites was Forest Glade. Of course, I haven't read them all (yet) so there may be others I will like more. Anyway, nice rhyme, great imagery, although I am left with a question and a comment.
Question: Did you write this looking at the stars?
Comment: No one laugh at this...The design on the left looks like a face to me. There are two eyes, a big nose, and a smiling face. It looks like it also has a top hat. Call me crazy... -
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a beautiful painting
great write -
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great work! i really like your picture! and the poem too, of course!
Sam -
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The imagery is awesome and beautyful -
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Oooo so pretty paints a picture and the picture is prettiful too :) excellent piece i enjoyed much
Treas -
excellent
I agree with Ivy...This is enchanting Susan! You have a way in your writins of creating such lovliness...
Like this one a lot, I always sit and look at the stars. I am in love with the sky!!;)
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The view is lovely from here. I love the way you list the things the stars have done and will continue to do into infinity of the universe's presence. -
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Blushful Moon...This is a gorgeous poem of the celestial, of the promise of the night. You are so gifted at illuminating your poems with dancing stars and radiant beams of light. ***Ivy Rose -
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Thanks for the comment about my poetry. As for this, it's brilliant. Has an awesome flow, and I think has improved my vibe for the day. : ) Nice write! -
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Nice...................... -
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Very cool. It's pretty, tra la la to read:)
Ryhme is great too:) -
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Another beautiful write from your pen Susan ...
Thank you
Sammy -
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I can see why you're a published poet! This is beautifully written, and very vivid, just the way I like it. :)
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Thanks Lisa Robert and Paradox
Blessings
Susan~~~
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excellent
AMAZING! :)
I so rarely look at the stars,
Never watching them just passing them by in casual obseration.
I should look at them tonight. -
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Sparkles! I really liked this one! Many ***********for you!!
Robert -
excellent
beautiful susan :)
ty for sharing
Lisa
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