WHAT IS LIFE?
IS IT A CHAIN OF EVENTS
WHICH WHEN ONE DAY ENDS
NEVER COMES BACK AGAIN?
IS LIFE ONLY A DREAM
DOES IT ONLY SEEM
TO BE WHAT IS ONLY AN ILLUTION?
IS LIFE A BED OF ROSES
WHICH SOMETIMES CAUSES
PAIN, DUE TO THE PRESENCE OF THORNS?
IS LIFE A GAME
OF LOSING AND REGAINING FAME,
OF BEARING WITH THE TIME, NOT TAME?
WHAT IS LIFE?
IS IT ONLY A QUESTION
THAT CAN NEVER BE ANSWERED;
CANNOT BE INFERRED
FROM THE CLUES, WE HAVE?
AND IS IT RIGHT
THAT LIFE IS SOMETIMES BRIGHT
BUT SOMETIMES AS DARK
AND SCARY AS AN ENDLESS NIGHT?
ALL I KNOW IS THAT
I HAVE FAILED
TO SOLVE THE PUZZLE OF LIFE.
PERHAPS THAT IS WHAT LIFE IS
A PUZZLE, TOO DIFFICULT FOR ME.
SO, I ASK FOR THE SOLLUTION-
WHAT IS LIFE??
Author notes
Option 7: Rhyming Poems
Prompt 14 : LIfe
Written December 25th, 2004
A contest entry
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Sorry for the delay in judging; and thank you for taking the time to enter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Awh.. this is a really inspirational brilliant poem
thank you for entering..xXx -
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Thanks! I am really glad that you liked it. I wrote this poem when I was 14. One of my earliest and most favourite poems.
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i wouldn't kno that answer, lol, its good, very intresting, something people might not think about often, witch makes it even better, thanx for entering -
This poem has some good potential Please feel free to revise and i will be back to judge it later next week.
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thank you for entering and good luck!
leslie -
i ask myself all the time what is life.
you did a good job with this write.
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hello nivedita
... this is a very interesting write here... everyone has its own definition of LIFE.. and then this is such a complicated word to define... through one's own experiences people comclude on what life is.... .... your poem here is very well .. you should keep on writing..
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I think this is very well written. I especially liked the lines
"IS LIFE A BED OF ROSES
WHICH SOMETIMES CAUSES
PAIN, DUE TO THE PRESENCE OF THORNS?"
Great write. I thought you had some wonderful verses in here.
Happy holidays
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Thank u for spending ur time on it.
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very intresting wright i loved it you chose your word wisly you did a great job on your toughts with this as well great job well done.
EE
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