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daizy

No, this song is not about a girl its about violin




these lovely notes are meant for two, not one

I cant believe that im doing this to you, no fun

The orchestra so loud,

it rang out like a storm,

I could play for days,

with my daizy.



My daizy she sang beautifully,

As I played their heartstrings with a bow,

Together we sang marvels,

In front of audiences big and small.



you must think im crazy,

To love my dear sweet daizy,

But i think the insanity,

is giving her away.

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Written December 24th, 2004

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  • ill always love you
    March 23, 2006
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    hey gurly! i love this poem! you adn ur dazy! i swear! lol jk.. i love your violin its so pretty!


  • The cuteness
    December 27, 2004
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    lol, ya i named my violin daizy. erggy bout james lol, o well. ya i love morgann no matter what, shes just a loveable type person. newa mwasy mua Slipp


  • Mad Poetess
    December 24, 2004
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    Wow, I totally don't get this but it sounds really awesome, it's all flowy and amazingly written. I love it. And I know I have new friends and stuff but there's just something about Morgann, something that makes me miss her so much. Love ya babe, and this was great!! It's 3:37 and I'm at my grand parents house, on your sn!! Sorry...
    Sexy Sadie