Happy birthday Melissa
And best wishes from me.
Presents galore to receive
Peace is one you will find
Yonder amongst the rest.
Beauty in your soul I also see
It's yours beyond any doubt,
Radiating from your heart
To light your way to the
Heavens above, bringing you joy.
Dreams coming true I see there too
Arriving wrapped in golden thread
Your wishes I see are also granted.
My gift to you on this your day is
Eternal peace with the Lord you love.
Landing at your feet for you to find
Is a heart shaped box.
Sealed with kisses from all your friends
Sending their love on your birthday.
Always know that you are dearly loved.
Author notes
Written December 23rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Birthday wishes contest by Samplette.
300 points, ended December 27, 2004, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow I really like what you done here, great birthday gift to melissa x
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Another one penned from your loving heart sis
A simply beautiful Acrostic Poem
Happy Belated Birthday hun
Love this
Love you too
Susan~~~
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Oh how beautiful this is and so worthy of great merit. This shows the wonderful friend that you are Joan. CONGRATULATIONS!!! And many more birthdays to Melissa!
I love you sweet sister! 
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Thanks Kris, it was a nice surprise~Love~Joan
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Congratulations Joan on getting second! Keep up the wonderful work you always do. Love you lots!
Kristina
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Another beautiful poem to Mel! This acrostic is very lovely and says so much about the wonderful person that Melissa is.
What a great joy to have friends who keep us warm kept in their heart
Love and peace,
Mari
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A lovely tribute to Melissa, thanks for offering me your picture although I'd rather not give out my email address. Good poem you have here
All the best,
Pozo
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Excellent Acrostic AAAJ.
This is a well done Acrostic that shows how loving your heart is and I especially love the heart shaped box in your poem. Lynn got me an emerald type necklace shaped piece of jewelry in heart shapes. Vivid metaphor and reminds me of how my mother would get me heart shaped valentine charms on Valentines day from crystal to ruby and everything inbetween. So excellent choice for truly gifts in heart shapes make us feel dearly loved.
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this was everything Melissa deserved..she is so special..and so are you Joan for writing it and Sam for thinking of this...leanne xxx
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this was a great tribute to Melissa.. I hope that ou and your family have a great Holiday Season.
Yvonne
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Excellent!
Joan,
Wonderful poem you have written about Melissa. It is very beautiful and your words are very sweet and caring. She's getting so much love on here!! Good luck to you in the contest. Love you lots!!
May the colours of the rainbow follow you always and forever.
Smiles always,
Kristina
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This is a wonderful acrostic for Melissa. She is a loving woman, and I know you have helped to make her birthday a great one.
Thank you so much for sharing your love by entering this contest.
Sam
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Well, We are going for lunch to my wife's nephew who's birthday is on 25th. December so he hardly gets any birthday prezzies. I also feel sorry for Melissa who must suffer a similar fate. I already wished her a happy birthday and do so again.
Bea, I am sure that the beautifully worded poem above will add considerably to her birthday joy (even if it is non-rhyming!!)
and it is obviously written from your huge heart. Ap[plause.
Good luck in the contest.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh. -
This is a beautiful Birthday Acrostic and I love it dearly. You are truly an angel and I am grateful to have your words as a gift on my Birthday. I am glad that I am seen in such a beautiful light and I know your words come from your heart. Thank-you for your beautiful words on my Birthday!
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