My life seems to be insignificant
It seems like I am nothing
Many say that I am worthless
I suppose they could be right
No one really notices me
Maybe I'm invisible
I guess this world wouldn't miss me
If I were to cast away my soul
Maybe it would be better that way
This life has swallowed me whole
All I've ever wanted was
For someone to love me
But all I am left with
Is a broken heart and mind
Broken perfectly, completely
Never to be healed
Too wounded for any hope
All I feel is despair
No one will ever love me
I'm only meant to be abused
Unworthy of love, unworthy of care
I'm meant to be alone
I live alone, I'll die alone
Forever tormented, forever unloved
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Written July 21st, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Darkness is a true art! by papercutangel86.
300 points, ended March 28, 2005, 39 entries
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Well, I love you! lol, nice poem...
peace
doug -
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That's an interesting poem... Maybe it would have been a good idea to add more in feelings and emotions. Don't take me wrong, that's a great poem, but I thought it was lacking of depth... Good job -
Good poem I hope they are all this good I will comment later. Good Job
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ditto of NightTiger. If you've got the guts to die, then you've got the guts to live. If you won't do it for yourself, do it for someone else. I for one would be devistated if you committed suicide. please don't.
nice poem here. sinple rhyme scheme brings out the complexity of the thoughts. good job and thanks for entering.
Jen -
Forever loved, forever worthy, forever missed if you were gone, not only to me but others. I hope you start feeling better hunny. Merry Christmas, and smile, you never know who's life you're saving or who's heart you're touching.
~~Jessica Erin
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