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Christmas Eve

Santa will come tonight,
dressed all bright,
he will quietly soar,
and won't fall to the floor.
He'll come down the chimney tonight,
the entrance down will be tight,
and he'll lightly placed our gifts
he visits you and lifts your head
and kisses you goodnight
and takes away all your fright.
He goes back to his sleigh
and whispers away.

Tomorrow when you awake
you'll see a smile and take a moment to thank.
You check your chimney in case
Old Santa got stuck and needs some extra space.
He's not there and is safe at home
with Mrs. Clause and they can roam.

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Written December 23rd, 2004

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  • applepie1254
    January 14, 2006
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    aww thats cute =P awesome writing and keep up the great work sharon ^_~

    ~>erika


  • UncleSpace
    June 24, 2005
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    Yey Mr. & Mrs. Claus!

    This is a nice and cute and funny Santa piece. Thank you for your very sweet comment too, and please keep writing and always go back to it, you'll just get better and better!

    USpace