Ja ama vou boo coup Mon Cherie in Clair de lune
As in the sunshine and all shadows therein.
Your heart hath soothed me while bringing me home to you.
As with words before, with all mine love I love thee and all mine life I trust thee.
For thou hast stood in Clair de lune with a white dress upon your silhouette, symbolic of our marriage.
Thus I had seen thee standing alone in the darkness of all lights searching for me and telling me you were there all along.
Oh my love how I hurt as thou stood alone in the vast of having,
And having more, as I now see thou are part of mine dwelling place of which no one knew?
How could thou hast found me in this place unseen by woman or man?
I stand amazed on this porch thou hast so rightly found in wonder of your beauty.
For there is within thee an awe of displays as mine life unfolds from thine lips,
On which lips I give mine in a numbness embrace for the sweet taste of destiny.
My dear lady of souls divine, how I love thee in all universal time, of languages throughout.
You have brought unto me a peace beyond the beauty of white lilies at heavens gate.
You have spun a web of gold surrounding mine heart and inlaid silver linings throughout mine soul,
Of which this treasure I give back unto thee to spend in all our tomorrows of yesterday forevermore.
And lo my passion continues to rise as I feel your piano’ed fingertips, gently down the torcel of which I lay down upon thine body I cherish as one.
The way thou desires to run your nails into mine flesh from a feeling of love in its highest enchantments.
I bare mine arms around thee, pulling thee into mine soul as I whisper I love thee with breath into thine ear.
At the moment thine head tilts back baring thy neck above thine shoulders, I know, by the kiss I left behind, took thee to the highest peak in love as one.
In a pause we gaze into the eyes of ours and see our souls united as one,
For thine love is my love and mine is yours.
Together, our love a mystery for those who cannot understand, the understanding is brought forth.
A love so rich and pure, even the angels who brought us forth, stand still in awe of this wonder created by the hands of God.
Author notes
written for Angeleyes711
Written December 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Beautiful Women by kjack.
300 points, ended January 7, 2005, 24 entries
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oh my. *hole in the soul*
absolutely nailed it.
that is all i know how to say.... this has stolen my brain. amazing... absolutely amazing. bravissimo.
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Love highest peak is the moment I first touched your face
I thought the sunrises in your stunning grace
Time stood still in your eyes my love
Time became the stars within your heart
Heaven bless us both from up above
One joy I can share with you we shall last to the end of time
If only I could hold you now and tell you things will be fine
As I feel, the tears rushing down your flaxen cheek
Oh can we ever wipe the slate clean as you heartbeat gently weeps
Oh, my beloved I’ve deeply prayed for a love such as yours
As I tremble today thru yesterday in sweet amour
Until the end of time, I shall love you
When I look up to the skies above for our truth
I know our love is true I know we deeply love each other
Above all others
As you whisper
I cannot fight what is to be so I will just let our love be
I love you, I love you, and I love you,
Deeper than the ocean of time
Oh, my love we shall last until the end of time
For we’ve always been one
In my heart, I know our journey has just begun
I love you within the heart of the stars
I love you deeper than the ocean of time
As I whisper you shall be forever mine
My love the first time I laid my eyes upon you
I deeply knew that I love you
We dearly paid a price for our love
And in the beginning or in the end
What is the path of true love my beloved friend
As I feel your tears in the dark and empty skies
The gift we both sing is the happiness true love brings
If you desire a lover to hold you above all others
This is I my beloved serenader
If you desire a love that is deeper than the oceans
This is I my beloved a captive bird of your loving devotion
Oh, this joy shall be forever yours and mine
Our joy shall last until the end of time
As for us my beloved
I could never love another the way I love you
I could never be false to the beating of my heart
Love is a rare and precious gift
I long to kiss you forever within the passion of ecstasy
Deeper than the ocean of time is our lover’s rhapsody
O our seventh heaven is our joy of timeless bliss
Let the heavens bless us my beloved
I swear to you there is no one but you
I only give my love my heartbeat my soul to you in truth
My beloved all our lives our love is a magic situation
Seems I’ve been a captive bird in a gilded cage
As I watch from afar the singer on the neon stage
In truth, I am missing the love of you
This lover’s spell would never leave as I bid you adieu
For I knew in my heart of hearts
That my love and soul belongs to you
As I looked up in a magic castle and counting the stars above
Forever I shall kiss you within my never-ending love
For the first time in my life, I know your heartbeat is mine
I’ve held your words so close to this heart of mine
Its true I shine as the heavens within the love of you
In truth I felt what could I possibly give to you
That you do not already have in this world
I pondered this kiss within my heartbeat awhirl
As I searched deeply for the love of you and me
What I could not see is love is your only need
What you let me see is love is the fire that flames within us as we
Listening to your sweet music carries me thru time
I know your love is sent from the divine
I am dancing on cloud nine
In our lovers wine
To a sensitive such as I
This bird took flight in the vastness of your charming heart
I know not all is fair in love in war
As I tremble when I sing I shall love you forevermore
My beloved you’re the greatest gift of my life
In my heart of hearts, I know you’re right
Your love is the deepest ocean of my delight
Lets us toast as one
To love that is the power of the sun
We can make love so beautiful below the magic moons
Sharing our heartbeats in the angels tunes
Thunder will come crashing as our bodies become one
Until the night is sighed away unto the morning sun
My beloved let the magic love within my heart
Fill you with cupids golden darts
Fill the mountains as they sing
I shall wear your golden ring
For your love is king
For you my beloved remain the happiness true love brings
In your heartstrings I sing
Together as one we can search for a place for our love
Together hand in hand somewhere there is a place for us
Our gift is our never-ending love
How can I tell this world of the gifts you give?
For your magic love has lifted us to the heavens of bliss
How can I tell this world of the timeless joy you’ve brought to me
If I could bring the heavens thru the darkness of terras shores
This gift be worthy of the joy I’ve found within your kiss forevermore
Thru the heavenly skies
I reach out to kiss your face
The winds begin to blow
We shall live in this enchanted place
As we watch our love forever, bloom and grow
Until the end of time
It is your love I seek to find
I love you, I love you, and I love you,
Deeper than the ocean of time.
Until the end of time
It is your love I seek to find
I love you, I love you, and I love you,
Deeper than the ocean of time.
12/24/04 1:40:59 PM
I love you I love you I love you
In one lovers flame of beauty and truth
Love is the gift we share
Today and Yesterday in our romantic affair
Deep within all our future past days
I could never love another the way
I love you
For my love for you
Is deeper than the ocean of time
Oh, your lips will be my divine wine
As my heart sings, I love you beyond time
My beloved I beseech of you
God joined us two as one
I only had a tiny clue
Deep within my brave heart
I pose a question to you
What is my connection to you?
As you rise the moon the stars the sun
Deep within my eyes
And the gift you give
Is the lightness of being loves Genesis
You simply give your love and your heart freely
And for this magic kiss, I will forever be one within thee
As you lifted me to the heavens above
Within your rare and precious never ending love
As I sit in awe in the miracle of us
Let us sip our lover’s wine in one lily breath of love
I love you beyond the stars
I love you beneath the deepest oceans deep
I love the way we fit together as one pair of velvet gloves
Beyond this worlds illusion of love
Until the end of time
It is your love I seek to find
I love you, I love you, and I love you,
Deeper than the ocean of time.
12/24/04 1:57:09 PM
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Azazel - Thank you for reading although I cannot tell you either but maybe, just maybe you can see this happening as she and I are in a true love of romance?
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"I stand amazed on this porch thou hast so rightly found in wonder of your beauty.
For there is within thee an awe of displays as mine life unfolds from thine lips,
On which lips I give mine in a numbness embrace for the sweet taste of destiny."
I dont know why, these lines just really stood out to me, Good job.
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Ancientson - Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. The classic feel you are talking about is because of loves truth in age. For passion and beauty are always found in true love as the mind learns to accept what cannot be changed in the hearts of the writers. Thank you again for your comment.
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Superb!
I love the flow of this and it's classic feel. The imagery
brings forth passion and beauty in the mind and heart of the reader.
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quietly burning - Thank you for reading this piece of poetry. As love is to anyone that is to say genuine, my heart applied itself with my soul and wrote about what is within me. As for the white light, can love be any other than pure?
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Dr John Celes - Thank you very much for your professional sounding critique. It does a soul, such as mine, very well to hear such manner about their writing. I have no idea of who Rabindranath Gitanjali is but sure that I need to find out. Now if I could only get the rest of the world to see what love is to me, I will have accomplished one of my many goals. Thank you again for your uplifting comment.
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excellent and mind uplifting
An unusual declaration of the greatness and divine nature of love and its uniqueness in a manner akin to Rabindranath's Gitanjali!A smilar feeling is also created but for earthly love.True Love has been raised to the altar of glory in a very original way! written in a tone of authority that is seldom found.excellently done. -
so genuine and sincere ...... pure like a white light
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puzzledone121 - thank you for your comment. Love in everyone is original as it is fit for themselves. Thank you so much for the comment you left it feels good to have an originality and some day soon it will be shown.
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-theheartofme- thank you for reading my writing again and leaving a comment for me. It is always a pleasure to read your comments.
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ive never read anything like this before.. i admire your originality..
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beautiful as always of course your inspiration follows the same.
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kjack - Thank you for your comment as love is always stunning and true love found will alwaysleave the world in awe. I am so pleased you enjoyed it.
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Wow, this is just stunning. All of the descriptions and imagery in this write is simply amazing. I am in awe after reading this. Thanks so much for entering the contest, and good luck to you.
becca
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