Pozo is a talented writer of poetry,
her free verse is beyond compare,
though her poems can be very political,
she can also write with such loving care.
Only sixteen but wise beyond her years,
her poetry is written with such perfection,
critical comments are always welcome,
will say if your poem needs correction.
Her political views are conservative,
she believes in the good Lord above,
an A student in her Drama class,
our dear pozo recently fell in love.
Though pozo lives in Great Britain,
she has political views of the United States,
she is anti abortion and for gay rights,
she thinks George Bush is really great.
Pozo is such a wonderful young lady,
she has charm, intelligence and grace,
to know her, read her fantastic poetry,
guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Author notes
Pozo My Pozo, I read poem Moment.
Written December 23rd, 2004
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-smiles- thanks for being so cooperative with me. I loved your poem and it described my pozo mum very well. Thank you for entering my contest. Please remember the judging was very difficult.
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I cant see the poem that was read all i See is \ or is that the poem?? Sorry i am tired and not thinking straight.
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Yes she is terrific and post so many wonderful poems. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes she is a wonderful poet. Take care, Sandy
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thnk you so much Kimberly. So nice to have you comment on pozo'spoem. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you dear friend. I always love your comments. Take care, Sandy.
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This is really cool, I know that she likes this one, it's right up her ally!
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Thank you for the nice comment, And thank you for letting me know about the word has, it does sound better. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you, I read 2or 3 of her poems everyday. I just forgot to put it in the authors comments. Sorry. Take care, Sandy
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I adore pozo. Everything you say is certainly true. She is talented, intelligent, personable and an all around sweetie. Great job Sandy. Good luck in the contest.
~Kimberly
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As i said I am not judging poetry untill the contest is closed but i am looking at authors notes to see if they read the rules. You did put Pozo My Pozo though a typo made it Ny Pozo, Lol simple mistake but also you never put a poem of Pozo-mum's in your suthors notes as my rules said to. You have untill the day I end the contest to change these things, and no I am not being rude just want to make sure your entry is not disqualified.
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wonderful
what a wonderful homage to a poet in this heart-warming portrait; i've enjoyed reading some of pozo's work, but didn't realize she was female and so young.
i hope you don't mind me saying this, but there may be a grammatical error in this stanza:
Her political views are conservative,
she believes in the good Lord above,
an A student in her Drama class,
our dear pozo has recently fell in love.
perhaps the last line could be something like:
our dear pozo has recently fallen in love.
or perhaps:
our dear pozo recently fell in love.
you've made somebody very happy with this poem;
i'm sure you will do well in the contest
as in my mind you're a winner already.
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I wrote a poem for Pozo too, because she must have the muse of about 5 people and the speed of a professional typist... and it's all good! Look, since June she's written almost 1,000 poems! Hmm, if this is a prewrites-allowed contest I might enter. Best of luck!
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The title drew me in because like many others, I have read Pozos great poetry. This was very sweet. She should feel very honored which, Im sure, she does. Great job!
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It was such a pleasure to write . I didnt even have to think, it just came so easy, because it is how I know you. God bless you, Sandy
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Wow! Thanks for this
I loved reading your poem, it was excellently written- thanks for your tribute to me It had so much of me in it and also so much of your best style, excellent write and another for my list
Wow, thanks for this and good luck in the contest
All the best,
AP grateful friend,
Thanks for commenting on my poem too
Pozo
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