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Worthless Life

When you commit suicide
You don't get rid of your pain
You give it to your family and friends

I've been suicidal
And I've cut myself
Its hard to get better
But you CAN get better
I promise you this
(pinkie swear no crosses count)

My friends didn't believe me
Now they're dead
Never coming back
And I miss them every day
Sometimes I can't even move
Because it hurts so much

Please, please don't kill yourself
Don't make your family and friends
Go through what I'm going through
Also, I read some of your work
And your an amazing poet
Suicide isn't worth it

Author notes

I don't know you. I don't know the reason you're suicidal but I know it doesn't matter. If you kill yourself, you add all the bad things that have happen and get nothing but your suicide. But if you don't kill yourself and you do something great, then you take all the bad things and make them mean something good. If any of that makes sense. Good luck with getting better and if you ever need to talk, just send me a message. I promise I'll read ever word, twice it I had to. Smile somebody loves you.
~Acadia~
Written December 23rd, 2004

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  • XxLeT mE fLY aWaYxX
    December 27, 2004
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    Passionate

    Wow, lots of passion and heart was put into this poem. It's amazing. Keep up the excellent writing~

  • will-bob
    December 25, 2004
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    inspirational

    wow.....lots of emotion for a stranger.....i wish i could see more of that these days......awsome write.

  • beauty-of-neptune
    December 23, 2004
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    Best of luck in this contest =)

  • beauty-of-neptune
    December 23, 2004
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    Aww, you're such a sweetheart, Acadia. I really liked the "(pinkly swear no crosses count)" line - it was really creative in this piece. I really like your last three lines as well; they seem really random, but very VERY well-placed (if that makes any sense at all). They all of a sudden bring a new dimension to this poem.
    XoMysticFaithoX


  • Kristen Corpse
    December 23, 2004
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    Nice piece. I know it is not worth it and I know that people do care. I guess, I did this contest to see how many people actually have something to say. Thanks for taking the time to read and to write a piece to let me know you care. Also, thanks for taking the time to enter. Good luck. Love always,

    Kristen

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