As I watched you go,
I almost lost my mind,
watched you go,
almost lost my mind,
such a long relationship,
it was one of a kind.
I wanted to call you today,
I almost gave in,
wanted to call you today,
almost gave in,
but I'm better off without you babe!
'cause with you I couldn't win.
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it's in a blues form of poetry. anyone like?
Written December 23rd, 2004
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Yea, I like it alot! I know especially after a long term relationship ends, one tends to not know what to do with themselves. Habits are hard to break. You're used to being with someone and doing things with them all the time and when it ends, you have to find things to do to take up your time.
Yea, I really like this alot!
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Wow, this is awesome! I've never read anything like it, but blues in the form of poetry, what a perfect idea! Keep up the good work.
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Great point
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I like bunches! It does kind of seem like it's leading to more. It's neat (as in cool!!)
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Okay, I will not let my husband see this. He might see it as liberating...
Actually, I like it a lot. I only wish there were more of it.
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That was really good! Two thumbs up! an enjoyable read!
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