Pale circle of silver,
Cast your light on darkened ground
illuminate
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Written August 24th, 2002
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I love moon light! It's so beautiful! Great haiku, I would've read more last night but I was getting tired, lol.
But fantastic job!
Kayla -
Excellent !!!!
"Cast your light on darkened ground" ~ Magnificently done !!!
Thank you for sharing , you ~
I dance beneath you ~ skinwalker
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this to very pretty
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excellent
Cool poem.
As clouds pass over
A dove sends its mating call
Just before sunset. -Brandon -
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A beauty.............. -
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it is sweet and beautyful -
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lovely
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Nam -
don't touch it!
Beautiful write...and the piccie is great...well done Sis..xxx~~GILL~~~ -
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beautiful! -
excellent
VERY pretty, goes perfectly with the picture too..:)
Blessings, ~ Ce -
don't touch it!
Amazing! -
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Very beautiful and enticing...
~Gayla~ -
Thanks Connor
i messed up tho...lol:)
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
excellent
tis beautiful.....
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darn it i mess up on these all the time
Thanks for correcting the error lol
Blessings
Susan~~~~ -
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I get 6, 7, 4
but its still beautiful :) & paints a lovely picture
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