If I have to let you go
If you want to leave me
I'll stand aside and watch
A part of my heart go free
Just know that you are in my thoughts
As you are forever in my heart
I'll forever be there for you, if need be
Though watching you go tears me apart
Just let my soul fly with you
Guide you through the trees
And know that I'll always love you
I loved you enough to set you free
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Written August 16th, 2004
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This is beautiful, and so sad too..... Lovely write. I don't know what to say! It kinda relates to a situation I'm in at the moment so that's why. *sniff* But a great write. Beautiful.
Rosie x -
this is so sweet. i love it. i feel like that too, except that im in the middle of setting something free. remember the saying 'if you love something, set it free, what comes back is yours, what doesn't was never meant to be' well i hope this person comes back to you. i like the way it flows and how titrhymes. i especailly like the last verse
good luck in the contest
xsteffx -
Good Job! i have been think alot about this specific subject alot lately and this put it so simply. The final good bye is so full of emotion but simply put. Well Done. Keep Writing.
lindsey
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This poem left me in awe. After reading this I can tell that you have a way with words that leaves your readers wanting more. I like the simplicity and the emotion that you created. This poem reminded me of that song thats like if you really love someone then let them go. Anyway very nice job! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
-candice -
I heard something like this somewhere before. And this poem is very touching. I loved the last verse soo much. Keep up the good work. I love your poems.
~Draconia.
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