hail mary
holy mary
she doth be
quite contrary
losing her faith
vacant from grace
holy mary
tears stain your sweet face
forget about chastity
sullied with sin
holy mary
blessed art thou among women
no more forgiveness
incredulous of heaven
holy mary
poor little virgin
absence of abstinence
dissolution within her
holy mary
pray for us sinners
now and at the hour
of our death
holy mary
grant us one last breath
Author notes
i do not believe the contents of this poem to be true and there is no harm intended.
Written December 23rd, 2004
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cool
I like this poem too. Thank you for commenting on my page! you're profile sounds cool too. I like this poem because it makes you think. I am also fascinated by religion in all it's many forms. I love philosophy. Bet you do to, after reading this.. do you? -
i am bored...
no not from your poem lol
do u really think this is appropriate? jk jk (the guy from amaranth)
hey i love this poem now! lol sorry but before i didn't really like it. heh. but i really like it now. it's soo beautiful
okay...bye...
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what an interesting piece! so thopught provoking! oooooooooooooooo! i love it its so awesome! i am currious are you catholic and just really pissed or something or are you mocking catholicism? just out of curiousity. regardless of your answer, this is a miraculous piece and i love it!
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good write
I think that if I had been the Virgin Mary, I would have said "No".
I wrote something like this a while ago, so I can see where
you are coming from. Not wanting to be disrespectful, but
wanting to get a little dig in anyway.
I like the simplicity here, and the lack of emotion. Just
telling it the way you feel it.
losing her faith
vacant from grace
holy mary
tears stain your sweet face
Lovely writing.
Best wishes ~ crisstiena
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well, you see.. i would really like to comment on this, but i just woke up so i'm a little braindead.. i'll try my best lol
i'm not even christian, but i've always been fascinated by the figure of the virgin mary.. she gets so much less attention than say, her son.. yeah, that'd be christianity, to put the mother figure in the background and the males in the forefront.
i like the way this was simple.. but deep.. and was very well written. i think the first 3 stanzas would have to be my favorite.
okay hope this made sense lol great write
-toxy
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