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I want to run away

I want to run away
Run away from my fear

Hide my face
Hide in a mask

I want to forget my sins
My sins I can never forget

I want to love
There is no one to love

I want to be fearless
But too many people have hurt me

I want to trust
But I cant

I want to feel no hurt
The hurt always haunts me

This is the pain you've caused
The pain within me
The pain that kills me
The pain that makes me cry
The pain that makes me want to die.


Author notes

This is rough and it makes no sense. But, in my life, guys have hurt me, either by rape, molestation, sexual abuse or physical abuse. This is sort of about that and how I cant trust men. Not even my best friend.
Written December 23rd, 2004

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  • TheBleedingSoul
    December 24, 2004
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    Thanks for the comment. I dont find this poem that great. I'm not great at saying how I feel on paper. I'm not really good at that in person, either.
    Edited on Dec 24, 3:08 because ''.


  • shadow aelf
    December 24, 2004
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    This is an incredible poem. It speaks to you and to those who have gone through what you have, but it also speaks to the common listener, the bystander, anyone really. This poem is so applicable to anyone's life that any one person can read it and say, "wow, this means a lot to me." Great poem. Great words.


  • -Silent-Tears-
    December 23, 2004
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    wow im speechless.. im sorry that it had to happen to you, but remember.. what doesnt kill you, only makes you stronger... its an awesome write. keep writing!!

  • haili
    December 23, 2004
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    i like this. its very open and deep to me. im sorry that u go through this but u cant run and hide forever. but if it were me i would at least try


  • rock faerie
    December 23, 2004
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    if i also feel that way.. i would runaway.. but if only its possible to run away and hide.. and it will all go away.. but it won't... how sad.. i love this poem.. keep up the good work.. and don't run away.. cause it won't do any good.. hehehe


  • eric-draven
    December 23, 2004
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    wow...i think you just need 2 start kicking some guys @$$ ive had friends who have been raped and physically abused it makes me so mad when i find out it happens to them...i almost killed this one guy who did it.. great poem,great expression of how you feel. each day u will become stronger

    Draven

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