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Death calls

Live to Cry and Die...
We all make mistakes...Every moment we wake...
I Shattered a life...It was my own.
So I lived this lie...It was meant to be.
I was meant to die alone.

Fuck it I'm fine...Fuck, there is no divine.
Fuck it there's no alpha...Fuck, there is no omega.
There is no today so there will never be a 'morrow
That i may borrow...to contemplate my sorrow,
Of this disease...Of lust filled poison.

So go find me that raven...that surely art no craven
Who lives outside my graveyard's door...
That ebony bird of sorrow...That bird of demon spawn..
Who croaks that taunting word from night to dawn.
...That fucking demon spawn who screeched : "Nevermore"


Author notes

To lose in meaning...Is to lose time
Written December 22nd, 2004

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  • tourmented soul
    January 31, 2005
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    awesome!

  • SamBam76
    January 26, 2005
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    I am putting you on my favorites list! :-D your a really strong poet!

  • IHeartFatBoyz
    December 24, 2004
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    Wow very powerful, Sweetie this is amazing. I love it, I love the title a lot. I'm like blown away so sorry I'm los for words

  • BabyDawlCryz
    December 23, 2004
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    Very nice

    This is very creative and intruiging. I think it's dark emotion appeals to me the most out of many poems i have read in the past. Good luck in future writes.